DrpOpZ's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bug]

Lovely Animation there. It doesn't really have a point, but is nice and smooth.

robbe responds:

There wasn't really a point to it, it was just for fun :)

[Whereabouts -Unknown-]

Love it

-GRAPHICS: 9/10-
Drawings: 8/10
Animation: 10/10

-AUDIO: 9/10-
Voice Acting: #
FX: #
Music: 9/10
Sync: 9/10

-CONCEPT: 7/10-
Content: 5/10
Story: 7/10
Originality: 7/10
Execution: 10/10

-OVERALL: 9/10-

-COMMENT-
This video shows that you perfectly know how to move through the temporal dimension of a movie, meaning you can animate pretty well.
I'd recommend it for FP without thinkin twice. Great job! 5/5

ehlboy responds:

woo! thx for the in depth review! its much appreciated and i'll keep it in mind :)

[Hedgehog on Fruit Hunting]

Healthy humorism still exists :)

-GRAPHICS: 10/10-
Drawings: 9/10
Animation: 10/10

-AUDIO: 10/10-
Voice Acting: -/10
FX: 9/10
Music: -/10
Sync: 10/10

-CONCEPT: 9/10-
Content: 9/10
Story: 8/10
Originality: 10/10
Execution: 9/10

-OVERALL: 10/10-

-COMMENT-
Very well animated, i loved the drawing style and also the FX are very well chosen and syncronized, with a little higher quality they would have been just perfect.
What i saw was, for the NG standards, unusual humor, subtle and just fine.
I loved it!
The only thing that you might have added was a (themed) preloader and an "end/replay" screen, just not to let it loop (like it is while i'm writing down the review :D)

Never been more certain to give my 5/5 and 10/10 to a video (and trust me, i keep those votes for something that deserves it, like this very cartoon).

Oh and, of course, can we please have more of these? :)

EugeneToons responds:

Thanks for your review, thats my first submission on this site. I'm new to flash, this animation was made in another software. I'll add buttons as soon as i can. And add a few other animations as well.

Edit: Done!

[Angry Scott : Ninja!]

Not bad

-GRAPHICS: 7/10-
Drawings: 6/10
Animation: 7/10

-AUDIO: 5/10-
Voice Acting: 4/10
FX: 5/10
Music: 6/10
Sync: 6/10

-CONCEPT: 5/10-
Content: 5/10
Story: 4/10
Originality: 6/10
Execution: 6/10

-OVERALL: 6/10-

-COMMENT-
The overall job works but is nothing too bright or exciting.
I liked the exaggerated mimics of the character, while other animations are quite simple... you should have put much more effort in them.
About audio voice acting could have been much more interesting: actual sounds like when you recorded you didn't want to scare your neighbours with strange noises (exactly what you should have done to get an excellent result :D), and also audio quality is low. To fix that work with internal flash audio editing (panning and volume adjust: fadings can do miracles if you get used with them) and set an higher output quality in publish settings.
Last but not least, work more on humor: nothing wrong with randomness, just take out more of it.
In my opinion all you need to do is polish here and there.
Ah also main character facial expressions reminded me a little bit of LazyBoy.

Keep it up!
3/5

ZoVies responds:

thanks :)

It was hard for me to do that high ninja voice xD The first few times I did it way too loud with my window open :3
thanks for the sound tips! I was searching for the problem for a long time... :| now I finally know what to do.
I am going to buy a microphone so you do not hear the zoom of the computer and work on expressions :)

This is my drawingstyle... Didn't wanted to copy LazyMuffin... :| ( I guess you ment him with LazyBoy)

thanks a lot for the good advice!

[Random Insanity Chapter 1]

Good start!

-GRAPHICS: 6/10-
Drawings: 7/10
Animation: 4/10

-AUDIO: 0/10-
Voice Acting: -/10
FX: -/10
Music: -/10
Sync: -/10

-CONCEPT: 4/10-
Content: 4/10
Story: 4/10
Originality: 5/10
Execution: 4/10

-OVERALL: 4/10-

-COMMENT-
Don't take it bad for the vote review, i try to be the most impartial i can.
But, beside the completely random story, i like your style and i see something very nice can come out of your head.
Add sound, set an higher FPS rate and with a little bit of practice you'll come out with something very interesting.
Looking forward to see a well animated and sound-bashing chapter 2.
Keep it up! :)

Katgirl900214 responds:

I honestly was not expecting like 5 star ratings, I just wanted to submit something and I thought this would be a good choice. I know the graphics aren't that great, and I'll admit I was lazy with the coloring. I also realize it would have been much better with sound. So I get where your going, and thanks for being nice about it :3

[Arc Omegis]

Smooth Fightin is always fine!

-GRAPHICS: 7/10-
Drawings: 5/10
Animation: 9/10

-AUDIO: 7/10-
FX: 7/10
Music: 6/10
Sync: 8/10

-CONCEPT: 5/10-
Content: 4/10
Story: 4/10
Originality: 4/10
Execution: 9/10

-OVERALL: 7/10-

-COMMENT-
Stickmen fight are one of the most common animations around the net. But not all the stickmen fights are worth watching. This one was well animated, with an avarage audio component and quite a satisfactory kick-ass action. Also, squirtle gag is nice XD. 4/5

Nhazul responds:

Thanks for the complex review. I appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed.

[Phat]

Undeveloped

-GRAPHICS: 6/10-
Drawings: 6/10
Animation: 5/10

-AUDIO: 6/10-
FX: #/10
Music: 6/10
Sync: 6/10

-CONCEPT: 6/10-
Content: 5/10
Story: 5/10
Originality: 7/10
Execution: 7/10

-OVERALL: 6/10-

-COMMENT-
The idea was nice, but the concept could have been developed better with more gags and also taking more time. Worth a rapid glance and a couple of laughs.

Ayai responds:

wow thanks for the detailed review!

[Fps Combat]

What a pity!

Such a nice animation left uncomplete!

Here's my deal:
i gave you 10/10 in the review but 1/5.
The 10/10 is for showing my sincere appriciation to the smoothness and the style of the animation.
The 1/5 is for not making this animation pass, so that your next animation (which i really encourage you to do) won't be "spoiled" by this one.

It's a real pity it's just a scratch, i'd stand amazed in front of an entire toon drawed liked that.
Oh and if that toon come, i'd be glad to give you the vote you deserve.
Keep it up!

Matt2k8 responds:

I appreciate your review but i accidentally submitted this..